More "Roughs" and Stuffs

Since receiving feedback on my story idea, I realize now that this series of pre-storyboard thumbnails are now invalid, but I figured I would post them anyways as part of my process, and because feedback as far as staging/shots would still be helpful so that I may improve.

This is just a sample of my ideas for the intro scene in which Flip, the small nervous bird, is waiting at day break while all the other birds are asleep, so that he may catch "the worm."

I am also including some rough character sketches of the larger, obnoxious blue jay character, as part of my process as I am finalizing his design. Although I stated he is a blue jay, my designs are currently more non-descript showing a unique looking bird rather than a specific species. All feedback is immensely helpful.